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“The first sentence has to have a solid punch.” —Steve Berry from “Twisty Business” Let’s talk about it.
I agree, it’s very important that you grab the reader’s attention right from the start. Even more so, now that a prospective purchaser has the look inside feature on the Amazon sales page. Your cover and blurb might catch the eye, look inside is a chance to check out the start of your story before committing to purchase.
You might have more than a sentence to get your point across, but not a lot, certainly by the end of page one you have to give a casual browser a reason to become a superfan. You need to get to the point, quickly.
There are several ways you can achieve this. You can ask a question, suggest that you’ve joined the narrative just as something interesting or unusual is about to happen, or describe a problem and then hint at a solution.
Here are three of my all-time favourites.
“In a hole in the ground, there lived a hobbit.”
“His name was Gaal Dornick and he was just a country boy who had never seen Trantor before.”
“It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.”
I’m sure they don’t need any introductions (The Hobbit, Foundation and Nineteen eighty-four, just in case). When I first read them, they instantly drew me in and made me want to read more.
Because, they tell you everything and nothing, answer a question but leave you with another. Say something strange that demands an explanation. They grab you and force you to read on, in case you’re left forever wondering what happened next.
Here are a small selection of first lines from my novels. While I would never claim that they’re in the same class, hopefully, they’re doing a similar job.
I could see the feet sticking out from under the auxiliary generator; they were small and very pink, the nails painted with rainbow glitter. (Myra)
“Vanessa, what are you trying to do? Slow down.” (Life and Other Dreams)
“Is that it?” The entrance was in partial darkness, the alleyway behind me dimly lit with flickering tubes. (Andorra Pett and the Oort Cloud Café)
I was sitting by the pool, with a tall glass of gin and Athleberry (lots of ice), when I got the call. (The Hitman and the Thief)
When I wrote those first lines, I had no idea what sort of story would develop from them. In the end, I was pleased and surprised to see where they ended up.
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